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The Smiths at Number 5

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The neighbourhood had really pulled together,thank heavens, they had got rid of those dreadful Smiths.

The Reverened Platney sat in his study,his head in his hands not quite knowing if what had happened over the last three days was a bad dream.

He had not realised how much hate could be generated against people deemed not “fit to live with” by a most respectable and thoughtful community.He had been an unsuspecting party to events ,and he felt ashamed.

He had not exactly been duped by the Commitees arguments,he had felt at the time that he could counteract the vitriol against Elena Smith,her husband and their  children with his logic and a healthy Christian outlook,but events had overtook him and in the end he had been forced to vote with the Committee and had been one of the signatories on the expulsion order. His hands had been tied,and now the Smiths were gone.He realised what a fool and a coward he had been.

The Smiths had arrived in the village of Baysea on the South Coast of England about ten years ago.They had bought a small cottage with a bit of land and were very much welcomed by the village as “fresh blood” within the community,with their three young children who would boost the local school numbers and protect it from closure.

Elena Smith was a yoga teacher,her husband had been “something big” in the city,but now planned to “do something small” in agriculture in their little village.

It was the refusal of invites to coffee mornings and Church Council meetings that gave cause to the community to feel slighted ,and it was generally agreed that  that the Smiths were a bit ” standoffish.”

However ,when it became clear that the Smith’s planned to home school their children ” for religious reasons” and that as a result of this and lack of numbers at    that the Village  school would have to close.The Smith’s were deemed  “outsiders” and the “Welcome Mats” to the newcomers were no longer proffered.

Indeed ,  the parents of all those  children who were  forced to make the five mile a day bus journey to the new school in the town blamed the Smith’s entirely for the loss of their village school. It was a resentment that they harboured for many years to come and would have damning consequences.

Elena Smith had little to do with the community in Baysea.The cottage that her and her  husband had bought mortgage free had been known in the village as “Wildflower Cottage”, for the obvious reason that the meadows surrounding it were indeed full of wildflowers in the Spring and Summer.

The Smiths loved the flowers and kept the meadows as they were ,but again , citing “religious” reasons the name of the Cottage was changed to  “No.5”

It was the local postmaster who spread the word about the change of name to the villagers. Some thought it,an expression of witchcraft , confusing the word pentacle as a 5 sided figure when it was usually six or indeed a square.Others thought that Mr Smith was some sort of UFO enthusiast and perhaps 5 had a significance to him for reasons they could not fathom.They were all stumped when they were told that the reason for the change was “religious”. They asked themselves what was wrong with the name “Wildflower  Cottage.”

Over the years, Elena had  often walked or cycled to the village shop from the cottage. She needed necessities like milk ,eggs ,and sugar and occasionally had the odd letter or birthday card to send.No one spoke to her ,and she spoke to no one. Was it strange?Elena did not think so. She had no desire for idle chatter,it always led to trouble,so she was not in the least bit  concerned as increasingly the village seemed to turn against her.

There were , however , her children,one of whom was now  in her teenage years.Stella was a very beautiful and an inquisitive teenager.Mature beyond her years and having just had her sixteenth birthday with her extended  family in London,returned to Baysea determined to integrate into village life.

She got a part-time job in a small arts and crafts business. It was there that she met the Reverend Platney’s son Josh, who was 18 years of age and about to head to university to study physics. Stella was Josh’s first serious girlfriend. It was a platonic friendship to begin with,but once Josh was at Exeter University,Stella visited him ,and the relationship blossomed and was consummated many times on her visits.They became an item.

The Reverened hoped that through Josh, he would find out more about the Smiths,but this had not been the case. Infact, Josh became increasingly distant from his father and when he graduated after three years  at Exeter and moved to do a PhD in London,he lost contact with his son altogether.

Reverened Platney was hurt by this,but was always  reassured  when he bumped into Stella  in Baysea .Stella lived with Josh in London but would occasionally visit her parents at Baysea  and would tell him  that Josh was fine, but that his thesis was proving very difficult and once he had got that out of the way things would get back to normal and he would be in touch.

Josh never did get back in touch  and Josh and Stella  disappeared from  Baysea.  As far as the Reverened was concerned, they had disappeared from the  planet.

The Reverened Platney felt uncomfortable the night he knocked on the door of Number 5 and asked to come in.Elena answered the door and told him it was not convenient.

“Mrs Smith,I just want to know if  you have  heard from Stella,I miss my son so much.” He pleaded with her.

“No,no,you must understand,that children grow up,they have their lives to live.I’m sorry I haven’t heard from Stella either,but I don’t worry.They will get in touch when they are ready.It’s a very busy time for them in their lives. We must not be selfish Reverend.”

“But,I just need to know…..” Elena shut the door gently in his face.

This incident had made Reverened Platney very angry.Nevertheless ,if Elena Smith did not want to talk to him, what could he  do?

The other two Smith children,who had reached the age of  twelve and fifteen prior to their removal ,were often seen around the village and working on Mr Smiths smallholding.They were good looking, quiet and polite.They would occasionally speak when spoken to but on the whole said very little and seemed very happy with their own company.

Mr Smith grew vegetables very successfully and left any extra produce he grew on a cart for the villagers to help themselves to ,which they did.

One rainy Monday ,The Reverened Platney received a letter postmarked London one .His hands trembled as he hoped against hope that it was from Josh,his son.

“Dear Dad,

I am very sorry that I have not contacted you for such a long time.I’ve finished my PhD. and am now a Doctor of Physics.

I wanted to ask, have you seen Stella? Has she  been back to  Baysea?I haven’t seen her for six months now. She left with an overnight bag and said she had to attend a work course and would be back in a few days.She hasn’t returned ,she was three months pregnant.I’m out of my mind with worry.

Things here are very strange,the Police say they can’t help as Stella has no papers,passport, or anything. As far as they are concerned, she doesn’t exist.What does it mean?I’m worried sick about Stella and the baby.

I would have rang you,but as I said ,things are very strange here,I’m pretty certain the phone is being monitored, and I’m sure Stella felt she was in some kind of danger. Please write and let me know.

It’s getting really difficult to travel here,otherwise I would come and see you.There’s a lot of anti here,protesting and the like against everything on all sides,but mainly anything different from the status quo.Whatever the status quo is?

Anyway ,dad,let me know if the Smiths have heard anything?

Love Josh.

The Reverened Platney reread the letter and placed it on the table.

He thought to himself. “No papers,no passport.”With things as they are, that’s a very dangerous situation  to be in. Being a member of a National Church,he knew about the new restrictions on people’s freedoms and the government’s plan to protect society from pernicious influences.He felt it was right,that the government should intervene to protect the moral fabric of the country.That is why he had been the third signatory on the removal of the Smith’s from Baysea.They were to be taken away tomorrow to a “holding facility”. It was too late,he had done what he felt right at the time, and now he was not so sure.It was too late to change anything.

The Police would take them away tomorrow, and Baysea would never see the Smith’s again. Whatever had happened to Stella,no one would ever know.

He would write to Josh and let him know what had happened,but not that he had been instrumental in the process of removing the Smiths.He didn’t need to say anything about that,he had not been the only one to want to get rid of them. He had advised the committee what was possible.

But,what about his grandchild?What had happened to his grandchild? ,He took Josh’s letter in his hand and crumpled it as the tears ran down his face.

                         The End

Fictional Baysea

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Take One Step ,and I will take a hundred steps for you.

I spoke to a lady today who spoke of her grandfather to me. The relationship with her grandfather was very close,and though the family did not have much(I think she was originally from the Indian Sub-Continent) ,he encouraged her by saying to her.

“Take One Step, and I will take a hundred steps for you.”

Her grandfather is long dead,but at the weekend,she was at one of her religious meetings, and it was suggested that the devotees do a hundred steps a day and dedicate it to one of their gods.

She was very excited about this prospect when she spoke to me. She had already been trying to do ten thousand steps a day for fitness.

Excitedly ,she told me that she would add another 100 a day, and it would be paying forward for a better future,that with her late Grandfather’s help, she would be able to offer a million steps to her diety for a better World by the target date of September 2024.

I thought it quite wonderful and such a pure thought and effort to make things better. I was happy to have a conversation with her today and walked away very happy.

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My Suzuki DRZ-400

What’s the thing you’re most scared to do? What would it take to get you to do it?

At this moment of time,I’m most scared of getting on and riding my beloved Supermoto DRZ-400.

Circumstances have meant I haven’t ridden it regularly for almost three years. I’ve hopped on it occasionally to bump start my interest, and every time I fall in love with it and say I must go out for a ride regularly, and then I don’t.

Around here, we have lovely quiet country roads, and what I really enjoy bimbling around on my motorbike.The feeling of freedom,the scenery, and the fact that it’s a mode of transport that epitomises independence.

At the moment, that is the rub, I’m filled with the dread of what might go wrong. What if I get a puncture ? What if I run out of petrol (the tank has only 90 miles)?What if I can’t open the petrol filler cap?What if I leave the choke on and flood the engine.Where can I park it safely? What if the breaks don’t work?What if I miss a gear?Suppose I can’t find neutral?Suppose I press the wrong indicator?

Too much worrying about what ifs,indeed what I need to do is get out and ride along all these lovely roads and enjoy it.I’ll always get home.I’m in the AA. I will do it, and I will learn more about my bike and myself.

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What do you complain about the most?

Is it not true that recently we discussed a similar WordPress prompt with the title “NAME YOUR THREE PET PEEVES”? It’s okay since all of us are aware of the famous phrase,  “History repeats itself.” Participants have enthusiastically come out boldly and mentioned various complaints they make as their life journey progresses. My discussion today […]

What do you complain about the most?

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To Complain Constructively

What do you complain about the most?

I whinge a lot about most things.At this moment,it’s unpredictable refuse bin collections and waste recycling.

To be honest, I’ve just had the carpet pulled from under my feet today ,as the big black bin and the waste food bin were collected as promised on time this morning.Infact I’ve even had time before I go to work to put them back in their slots in my garden.Result

I whinge about not having enough time,not enough money , that the dog wants to choose his own route on his walk.That a large washing up bottle only lasts a week .I mean, I could go on forever with my list.

…but complain I rarely do that,because I work in Customer Service in a lowly position where I deal directly with customers.I know a genuine complaint when I see one and there are investigative and reporting steps that can be taken to resolve the situation.

Few complaints are genuine,most are just whingeing, and a few are fraudulent. Still, if it’s a whinge,it’s best to listen as sometimes that is all people want.

When I do complain ,look out,because ,I am armed with all the arguments . As I have a strong belief that the customer is always right.It’s my job to make them feel their problem ,as they see it, is addressed.

So my current complaint is with our Members of Parliament who I do not believe are offering good value for money or indeed competence to the general public,they represent.

I will push for parliamentary reform.Close down the archaic House of Parliament(fit now only to be a Museum) and move Parliament to serviced offices in Milton Keynes.

That would rid us of the cronyism that is endemic in the House of Commons and House of Lords, and it would substantially reduce the expense of running parliament.

Complain for progress and to make things better.

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Sports

What are your favorite sports to watch and play?

Easy question that,watching sport is not a rewarding pastime for me.

Doing something where I have to prepare,plan,be active,learn a new skill,interact with others, and develop a strategy.That’s me, and that is sport.Any sport.

I have envied the ladies playing netball on the local tennis courts.They are all ages, and it is very competitive but fun . I’m just not brave enough to go up and join in.

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I suppose I already have

What would you do if you won the lottery?

The lottery as a tempting,entertaining purchase of a ticket either online or over the counter is not the only lottery.

There is, of course ,the lottery of life, and I am one of the many who have won at that.

For this ,I am grateful ,and in my everyday life, I do something useful with it, as there is so much that is needed.

The other lottery is a valid form of entertainment and can be used for great good or ill.

To win at both would be interesting, and hopefully, the gains would multiply and complement each other.

This is not a fait acompli,however, as a vast amount of money descending from what seems like the Heavens can distract and indeed corrupt.No one is safe from this. It would be a difficult path to tread,but not an impossible one.

For now, I will enjoy my freedom from that particular responsibility and will enjoy my own win and what I can do with it.

Namaste.

No One is Safe

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What books do you want to read?

WP asked a similar question sometime back, and I wrote that I was reading the Bhagavad Gita. (What books you are reading right now?) Today’s bloganuary prompt is: What books do you want to read? I don’t want to read too many books at once. which I used to do because I’m a multitasking wizard. […]

What books do you want to read?

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The Books that are yet to be Written

What books do you want to read?

Are there too many books out there? I don’t suppose anyone has ever counted how many books there are for every person on the planet. I will have to hypothesise with a simple number .A hundred.

Suppose there was a benevolent global law that said you had to read your chosen 100 books in your lifetime and sit down and discuss each book with a renowned teacher of your native language at a designated time.

For some, this would be a harsh law, compulsory reading,and debate. A waste of time,they would have better things to do, for most though it would be a lifeline into a World that in their day to day grind they had no chance to visit.

The affirmation that the World would care about their opinion on a book that they had read,that there would be a discussion,that there may be other alternatives they had not considered,that their thoughts and their words mattered.Surely that is why books exist.

So,the books I want to read are those that have not yet been written. For we need writers as much as books.

Good,bad,indifferent,we need people to express themselves, and what better way to do it than in writing?

A book can turn into so many things,it’s influence may be negligible or far-reachingA book can be loved, hated, or, I feel, the most dangerous fate treated with derision by scholars.

Have you read a book and thought this author is just going through the motions.

There is no soul in the book,they are showing off their prowess in language, and the thought process regarding the story is not original or they use sex or violence in a gratuitous manner . I have.I can smell a half-hearted effort at writing with each word.

On the other hand, I have soared with some writers, and it is a wonderful feeling.

I’m not on the lookout for the next best thing,but I am on the lookout for something that brings writing and stories forward.

The Books that are yet to be Written

The books I want to read are those with no title yet , they are yet to be written.

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Family Traditions

Write about a few of your favorite family traditions.

There are so many birthdays in our family . The tradition is the person whose birthday it is always gets a birthday card. If you are below the age of responsibility(eighteen),you might be lucky, depending on family economics ,to get some money folded neatly inside.

However,the important thing, is the Card.The second most important thing is that the said card should have a touch of wit and familiarity in it to make the receiver smile.

Youngsters will get cards of happy pictures of balloons and cakes,or if they have a particular interest like sports , cars ,animals,horse riding, or indeed there is a possibility of a badge with their age on it,if the sender can remember the receivers age.

With adults,jokes about ageing are good.Face up to the deterioration of your physical attributes as time passes.Laugh at the oncoming prospect of dementia and wetting your bed. There are endless jokes about plastic sheets,and the rubberised versions should you, be lucky enough to need a bed bath from your attractive nurse. (he/she/they).

The fact that we know each other well means anything goes.There have been many favourites over the years.

Being a gardener,my favourite is

“The rhubarb needs manure.”

“No, I prefer custard with mine!”

Silly I know.

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